Sunday, April 14, 2013

poem

I used repetition, simile, and Caesura

Ginger ;)

I came home
I came back
I came to you
I came for you

Taking care of you everyday
may be the best thing
You lift me up like god does the sun.

Lick, Lick, Lick
Your tounge and tail move so fast,
as each breath comes out so quickly.
Your happiness makes me happy.
You take another lap then come in.
running up and down around the house so swiftly.
Jumping, flying, gliding, and back down falling.

You are happy
You make me happy
You make me laugh
You make me smile

Tuesday, April 9, 2013

TROUBLE

Trouble my Taylor Swift is most deficiently not my favorite song, but it is stuck in my head right now, so why not write about it. I don't really think that there are many things about her songs that are very "poem like" like enjambement and sonnets, but she does use various types performance methods. She puts accents on her words and emphasizes the language.
Another thing that she does is repeat words. Not like repeating a chorus, she repeats words right after each other like, "trouble, trouble, trouble." Witch is a good poem method to use to put emphasis on things and make people look a little closer at them. She uses some good techniques that I would think about using next time I write a poem.

Reading post

I am having trouble picking a book to read. I was reading world war Z and it was great, but I got board so i moved on. Then I started Hate List, but could not really get into it. Now I am reading Great Gadsby, but I have to read my World History book. I am thinking the Scarlet Letter.
I really like the story line even though i don't know much about it. I am interested and I don't think anyone else is reading it so it is OPEN! Im a very confused reader right not.

Great Gadsby- 30 min
Hate List- 1hr
Wrote a poem- 45 min
Boulevard- 25 min